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I think this looks wonderful. About the only thing I see weird is his right leg. His right leg is a bit short compared to his other leg, perspective wise, I guess.

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Isn't that, like, 80% of the teenage population?

how beautiful sky..and boy <3 lovely!

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Nevermind. I think it's just the lineing of the pants of the right leg. You know, that faint line that is on either sides of the pants.

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Aw damn!
Hmm.. I think I'll probably go back and make his shin longer... to make it kind of seem more proportionate...?

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oh my god @_@
amazing as always

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this is great
i like it a lot

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Sounds good ^^

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May I suggest what you may think is off?

The glass roof looks awesome!

The sky looks fine, the clouds are beautiful.

What's off is that if he's "on top" of the roof, you've got him twisted like he's on the side of a glass building. At the angle if it's a roof, one would expect ground of some sort unless he's just on a glass roof in the middle of one huge sky.

The only other thing is you handled a distorted reflection VERY nicely, but it seems the clouds also reflected are sharp and crisp. If he knees become one unintelligible fuzz the sky would almost be one monotone blur.

Ummm ; I'm not a harsh critic so please don't take it this way.

The last thing I think may be off, is the torsto mass. Looking at his arms, and how they connect to the knees, I look at the hips and shoulders. It seems the more distant shoulder is lifted up and away from the body, but the knees meet both elbows at the same exact point. The hips don't seem to be twisted so the shoulders, hips, knees and elbows should match up with some imaginary vanishing point in the sky. But they don't quite seem to match, I think the error might lie in the body mass from the hips on up. It's there, nothing jars artistically but I don't think the mass has been defined at all. Where are the hip bones, the ribs, knowing what I know of anatomy it doesn't quite seem solid. They are well drawn and colored as individual parts though ^^

Sorry the explanation reads so long ;

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I absolutely love it, I love his clothes and the colors. You go!

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