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Artist's CommentsThis is I've owed z2ferndigi this drawing for a looooong time; she has basically commented on every one of my now 500 deviations/scraps, and helped me along the way with my quest for improvement I attempted to make it appear as if he is sitting on a glass roof... dunno how well that worked out; something seems really off to me but I can't put my finger on it. My brain like died trying to comprehend how the reflections would appear from that angle D:. Not entirely too pleased with the copious amount of white.. but that might just be because I'm stuck on my recent black/dark background desire. And omg so many freaking layers @_@;... I think I used 4 layers on the scarf.. but it was fun to do that part at least. Program: OpenCanvas Tools: tablet Time: Loooooooooong Finished: June 29th, 2008 Original size: 1000x1200 Also gonna count this for my fashion themes challenge ([link]) extra theme: duo-coloured hair. |
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**** Power of darknes ****
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PandaB O_O M
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PandaB O_O M
Hmm.. I think I'll probably go back and make his shin longer... to make it kind of seem more proportionate...?
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PandaB O_O M
The glass roof looks awesome!
The sky looks fine, the clouds are beautiful.
What's off is that if he's "on top" of the roof, you've got him twisted like he's on the side of a glass building. At the angle if it's a roof, one would expect ground of some sort unless he's just on a glass roof in the middle of one huge sky.
The only other thing is you handled a distorted reflection VERY nicely, but it seems the clouds also reflected are sharp and crisp. If he knees become one unintelligible fuzz the sky would almost be one monotone blur.
Ummm
The last thing I think may be off, is the torsto mass. Looking at his arms, and how they connect to the knees, I look at the hips and shoulders. It seems the more distant shoulder is lifted up and away from the body, but the knees meet both elbows at the same exact point. The hips don't seem to be twisted so the shoulders, hips, knees and elbows should match up with some imaginary vanishing point in the sky. But they don't quite seem to match, I think the error might lie in the body mass from the hips on up. It's there, nothing jars artistically but I don't think the mass has been defined at all. Where are the hip bones, the ribs, knowing what I know of anatomy it doesn't quite seem solid. They are well drawn and colored as individual parts though ^^
Sorry the explanation reads so long
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